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1）我的生日是在5月15日．My birthday is on May 15th.
2）我受到的最好的生日礼物是自行车，MP3，和小狗．The best birthday presents I have ever received are a bike ,an MP3 and a puppy.
3）我给我爸妈做过最特别的生日礼物是给他们洗脚．The most special birthday present I have ever made for my parents is washing feet for them.
4）我给我爸妈洗过碗，扫过地，整理过客厅．我准备做给我爸爸洗车子．给我妈妈敲敲背．
I washed the dishes,cleaned the floor and tidied the drawing/living room. Now I'm prepared to wash the car for my father and massage the back for my mother.

My brithday is on May 15.
The best gifts I got are a bike, an mp3 and a dog.
The best gift I gave to my parents is washing their feet for them.
I cleaned the dishes, the floor and the sitting room. I am going to wash the car for Dad and massage my mom.

我的生日在五月15号,我得到的最好的礼物是一辆自行车,一台MP3和一直小）我给我爸妈做过最特别的生日礼物是给他们洗脚狗,我给我爸妈洗过碗，扫过地，整理过客厅．我准备做给我爸爸洗车子．给我妈妈敲敲背．
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