初二英语作文、大家帮帮忙！

Last Saturday, I went to Susie's house for her birthday party. Susie is my best friend, so I decided to buy her something she really liked as a birthday present. In the morning, I took the No. 233 bus to the People's Shopping Mall. I found a very beautiful doll there, which was only 30 yuan. I paid the money and left for Susie's place at once. Luckily, she doesn't live far away from the shopping mall. I think it must be only 500 meters at most, for it only took me a few minutes to walk there.

way: by bike
money: ￥10
far:1kilometer
time:10minute

上星期六，我去了苏西的房子参加她的生日派对。苏西是我最好的朋友，所以我决定买一件她喜欢的作为她的生日礼物。早上，我乘坐233号巴士去了人民商场。我发现有一个只要30元钱但很漂亮的娃娃。我付了派宽钱直接就到了那儿。幸运改源的是，她的住处离商场并不远。我想最多就500米吧，因尘歼亮为只用了几分钟我就走到了那里。